The first comment we got was that they liked the bloody makeup as it made it look realistic. They then said that the police officer could of worn and outfit to show this was his role in the trailer. The next comment was that they liked the use of the reviews and the thing they didn't like was that the footage cut and you could still see the scenes and we should of used the fade to black effect. The next comment was that they liked the fact that we followed a narrative and the theory of the use of props and location being introduced. They said we could improve it by adding some more non-diegetic soundtrack.
The next bit of feedback we got was that it's clear that the story is about a girl who's gone missing and the main character is her best friend. They said we could've made it clearer why she is missing and how long she has been missing for. The next comment was that they liked the use of close up shots as it showed the characters facial expressions. The final comment we received was that the dialogue was clear for the audience so that they could understand the story line. And to improve it we could of included a variety of soundtracks to build up the tension.
I appreciated all of the feedback we got on our trailer. The feedback was helpful as if we were to make the trailer again we would include the what the audience said we could improve on or include to make the trailer better.
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